Love like this

Well, I've been dabbling in poetry for about an year now(Man of many talents lol:) ) I'll start on erotic poetry but, I wrote this poem and wanted to share it with everyone.


"Love like this"

I never felt a love
Like this before
It's a love like no other
Something I have always hoped for

A love with friendship
Humour and heart
A bond so strong
It would never part

A love that makes you smile
From ear to ear
A love that is joyful
Without any fear

A love that is beautiful
From the inside out
A love with no tears,
Pain, or doubt

A love with soul
So tender and true
A love that I have found
Only in you

That was very nice, sweet and romantic...thanks for sharing it with us.

Liked it.

Very nice, good to have yet another writer in our midst.

Thank you all for the replies...I really appreciate that!

This poem I wrote was published and I was amazed, since I'm a amateur. Totally shocked is more like it.

"My vow to you"

When you are sad, I will dry your tears
When you are scared, I will comfort your fears
When you need love, my heart I will share
When you are sick, for you I will care

You will feel my love when we are apart
Knowing that nothing will change my heart
When you are worried, I will give you hope
When you are confused, I will help you cope

When you are lost, and can’t see the light
My love will be a beacon, shining ever so bright
This is my vow, one that I pledge till the end
For you above all are my partner and best friend

These words I have written, speak of my love for you
From my lips these words spoken, shall always ring true
God has blessed me, and with your hand in mine
Both of our hearts, will forever intertwine

Into all lives, falls pain and sorrows,
I promise together, we will meet all tomorrows
Happy in Life , honor and love
blessed in unity by God above

"A dream come true"

Feelings that once were hidden
Are now expressed to you.
Days that once were stormy
Are now the brightest blue.

Times that once were lonely
Are now filled with pleasure.
All that once was mine alone
Are now things we both treasure.

Nights that once were cold
Are now comforting and warm.
Fears that once were very real
Are now gone with the storm.

A heart that once was broken
Can now finally mend.
A person once alone in life
Can now call you a friend.

Dreams that once were longed for
Are now all coming true.
The love I once thought was gone
I have now and forever in you.

very nice...thanks.

Thank you very much, Glad you liked it.

yes I did, and hope to see more of your writing.

Just an quick question!

Should I make separate threads for each poem I write? or just put all my poems in this one thread?

If you'd prefer separate threads, just let me know and next poem I'll post it in another thread.


I need to start writing BDSM poems, Just having momentary lapse of romantic feelings..okay what's wrong with me? LOL

Anyway, hope you all enjoy!


"If there`s one love"

If there's one face I want to see,
so beautiful, so true,
one smile that makes a difference,
to everything I do.

If there's one touch I long to feel,
one voice I long to hear,
whenever I am happy,
or just needing someone near.

If there's one joy, one love,
from which I never want to part,
it's you, my very special love,
my world, my life, my heart.

oh man! so much for editing.I was going to edit my poems from the thread. Just great!:rolleyes: