Just a silly poem

[Uncle_Ed]

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[John56{vg}]

Ed,

I don;t want to be a critic, but I think you got the rhyme scheme wrong.

It should be,

. . . . .


I always get that wrong too, so don't feel bad. Hehehehehehe

but seriously I was sorry I couldn't see the poem.

Have a great day.

John

[Uncle_Ed]

*LAUGHS*

Nice one, John!!!

[blythe spirit]

You're both wrong! *shaking my head.

The correct rhyme scheme is as follows

* * * * * ***
* * * * * ***
* * * * *
* * * * *
* * ** * ** * **

Enough said.

[Uncle_Ed]

*shakes head*

* * * * ****
* * * *****
* * ** ** * *****
* ** * ** * *

I should know-it's my poem!

[Rhabbi]

Silly is the word for this, the rhyme scheme and rythm both need work too.

[blythe spirit]

Hmph! Well, I stand corrected. Truly it is your "silly" poem; nevertheless the rythm is highly questionable. However, I commend you on it's superlative silliness.