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  1. 05-02-2011 #1
    amanda_serve
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    Hi,

    I wrote this;

    http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/s...p?storyid=8568

    I am kind of stumped at writers block at the moment. I would love to do some sort of collaboration story, doesn't have to be on the same lines exactly.
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  2. 05-02-2011 #2
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  3. 05-02-2011 #3
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    Thank you for the kind welcome.
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  4. 05-04-2011 #4
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    Hello and Welcome to the Library!
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  6. 05-05-2011 #6
    amanda_serve
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    Anyone have feedback on my story?

    Perhaps that would be help. I know the grammar needs work.
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    Hello amanda_serve.

    Welcome to the Library! There's a section in the forum called "The Writer's Society." You'll see it far down the page. Many of the writers post and help each other there. i'm sure they'd be much better at giving you some constructive feedback on your story. Good luck, and I hope you enjoy the site.
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  8. 05-06-2011 #8
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    Thank you! Sorry I am still learning my way around.
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    You're welcome, and no worries. I just wanted you to have the best chance for some good feedback.
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