Orchid,

For something you have just been playing with, that was really real done! I didn't notice any spelling or grammar errors. You created a wonderful atmoshphere of excitment and yet, I could feel the sadness in your story too.

Your next task is to let me know how you felt about writing your story without using anything other than yourself to check your work. Was it harder, did you have to read your work more, did you like not having the spell check on etc. It does not have to be a long piece, I just want you to reflect on the exercise. Also, I would like to know if you found it a worthwhile activity to do. I am in the process of trying to see what I might like to add or change about the level and would appreciate your opinion.

Thanks again for a great story

Aussiegirl