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If this is what happens when you "go with the flow", then you should do no other. It does have a touch of creepiness about it, but a good kind of creepiness, a warm shiver running up the spine kind of creepiness.


Marvelous use of imagery. i could feel that knocked-for-a-loop sensation. i really enjoyed this. i do hope you see her again, and maybe continue the tale.

Yes this one was really a 'flow' story. As I said, I wanted to write about the power of seduction and being powerless before it. Quickly, the story got a mind of its own and decided that being powerless allowed the monsters to come out to play. I'm not unhappy about it, its just different than I had imagined.

I don't think I could do a sequel to that story, though. A good story is not always enriched by adding to it and this one feels complete as it is, a standalone encouter. In addition, a sequel would belie the powerful last sentence.


And thank you for kind words and editing work. I really appreciate what you are doing for us Rose.

Satan_Klaus