Semicolon rule: Whatever is on either side of the semicolon must be able to stand alone as a sentence.
Noted
anonymouse
PS: Is there a time limit imposed on edits of a post? I've just noticed I can't go back and edit my original posting of the story anymore. The only option is to quote/remove quotes, edit, and repost.
anonymouse
"You know that place between sleep and awake, where you can still remember dreaming? That's where you'll find me..."