Quote Originally Posted by H Dean View Post
Only two things struck me as wrong or odd and should have been changed.

First, no taxi ever arrives on time. What ever were you thinking?
lol! Suspend disbelief...

Quote Originally Posted by H Dean View Post
Feel proud of this little tale. I had to dig so deeply to find a problem that my "complaints" are mostly in jest. I especially liked the ending. It was frightening and funny all at once.