My first story must have had a hundred sentences starting with "and". Had I known about this forum I would have avoided so many pitfalls. Fortunately, it all gets better with practice. Besides which, you are far better than I was in my first attempts at this stuff.

Check out my first published story here...http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/s...p?storyid=3215

It was constructed terribly. It's a good thing I didn't review it. I would have been mercilous.