Two Road Whores, Rode Hard.

[Dragon's muse]

Question 1

If it were my story, i would go with "Road Whores Ridden Hard".
That is what i would do, but it is your story. call it what you want to.

Question 2

Writing from the omniscent narrator works best for me, because i can get into everyone's head. It is hard to develop all the characters really when you only have the POV of one.

First person is difficult to write well, even though it seems so easy. It takes a LOT of work to overcome the "what i did on summer vacation" feel.

JUst my tuppence. As always, your mileage may vary. Bon chance.

rose

PS ~~ You might get more feedback if you put this in the pencil sharpening or story ideas forums.

[amandaserve]

Thank you!

I say "Two Road Whores, Rode Hard" because there will be two when all said and done.

Is it ever appropriate to post the first couple chapters to see what people think?