I put the initial story there, up to the point I decided I was not sure how to create the most plausible/interesting next steps for the story. It is at a cross road. I know I want the daughter to go on the trip, but whether it be as a result of her fighting with her husband and the daughter going with, or for some other reason I do not know.

So far, no feedback, but hopefully someone will chime in.

Thank you for your help.