Hi goodgirl_85,
Me again. I read you chapters out of sequence. Again, the same thing. I have trouble with so much first person singular, and when the Dom was speaking, I started to shout at the computer screen, "Keep talking! Just keep talking!" so I could have a break.
And again you did the same thing! The action was so interesting and logical, I wanted to read more of it. I wanted to find out more, but I wanted someone else to tell me!
goodgirl, for your sake, I hope someone more knowledgeble reviews your story, 'cause like I said, I just do it on a "Like, Don't Like" basis.
You've got a nice imagination, girl. You'd be hell on wheels as a party planner.
TG