Hey! sent u msn message... hope you got it =) im kinda new at this IM stuff.

Okay.. very deep.. i like the apathetic part.. because its very true how people who have been there dont feel the same scary way about death as others. There are worse things in life than dying..sometimes u live, and thats the real bitch of it... sometimes u live. But oooo, what a ride! =)

From a rhyming point? well, u know i dont give a crap about the flow or rhyming.. just the general feeling of the writing..however, here is what i noticed: it actually flows very well.. if u take out a word or two out of 3 sentences the whole thing flows perfectly.

Beautifully done.. as usual. =)