Thank you for the advice, Dean, and good to see you back.

I need to work on my vocabulary. 'Cunt lips' style gaffs are a minor problem compared to shallow pool of appropriate 'said' variants and descriptions for facial expressions.

As for the pirateese, I didn't focus on making him very believable, as I didn't think he was supposed to make much sense. I'll try to fix his speech and mannerisms in the updated version.

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I submitted a story (Motherly Love (No, there is no incest)) to the Library over week ago, but due to the holiday's it hasn't even been uploaded. I spent more time editing it than my previous submissions, so hopefully there aren't the spelling and wording errors that have plagued my other works.

In hindsight, there are two things I should have done better with the story.
1) Be more descriptive, especially during the sex scene.
2) Make the mother's feelings at the end less ambiguous and more believable.