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Strawberries and cream
Author: lits
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(Added on Oct 8, 2008)
(This month 39666 readers) (Total 43251 readers) |
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A girl invites her date for a dinner at home and gets to know her submissive side. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Escritor
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Oct 12, 2008 |
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Sweet!! And hot as well!
Minor spelling and grammar errors, not intruding at all with the flow of the story. The only confusing thing was the background setting of the characters, somehow I get this takes place in Germany and she's a German girl, but that's not explicitelly written, only vaguely hinted at.
Overall, very good story, would like to read further parts to this one, as well as more stories from the author (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
skp2bear
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Oct 10, 2008 |
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Grammatical errors in a few places such as Just after he pulled her panties she said "I coose" rather that "I chose". (8/10)
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