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shalya
Author: samboy
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(Added on Jul 21, 2012)
(This month 108155 readers) (Total 113890 readers) |
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A transformation of simple mommy to a cruel mean and sadastic woman |
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| Reviewer:
dave
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Nov 9, 2015 |
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No punctuation, no paragraphs, no discernible plot (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Rocky
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Oct 24, 2015 |
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I'd give it a zero if I could. WTF...have you not heard of "punctuation?" A 452-word sentence??? (1/10)
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