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  1. 04-27-2007 #1
    Dragon's muse
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    Rhabbi,

    A marvelous job on a difficult task. Opposite gender narration is always a challenge. There were one or two places when sentences could be clarified and a couple of tense issues, but my place to pick nits is back in level one.
    It is said that stories are never finished, only abandoned.

    This is an excellent piece of work. Bravo!

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    You made this work, Rhabbi. Congrats!

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    Quote Originally Posted by tessa View Post
    You made this work, Rhabbi. Congrats!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dragon's muse View Post
    Rhabbi,

    A marvelous job on a difficult task. Opposite gender narration is always a challenge. There were one or two places when sentences could be clarified and a couple of tense issues, but my place to pick nits is back in level one.
    It is said that stories are never finished, only abandoned.

    This is an excellent piece of work. Bravo!

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    Thank you for the kind words.
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