My Assingnment -- Pilloried in the Mid-East

[Rhabbi]

I cannot say I was satisfied, just that I reached the point where I knew nothing I could do at this point would improve it. I am sure that in a few years I will look back at this story and wonder why I did not do this or that. Untill then, we will have to be satisfied with what is.

[Ruby]

I cannot say I was satisfied, just that I reached the point where I knew nothing I could do at this point would improve it.

I think you were wise to stop with this revision. It was an assigment, not a story on deadline with a publisher. You did very well meeting the goals of this task and have expanded your writing skills, too.

I am sure that in a few years I will look back at this story and wonder why I did not do this or that. Untill then, we will have to be satisfied with what is.

Or you may look back on it and say, "Wow, my first story writing as a female sub. I did very well on this!"

I am more than satisfied with the time, effort and progress you made with this story.

Keep up the great work!