Advice needed

[blythe spirit]

I, for one, would find it refreshing to have a BDSM story written that was based on love. Not like a cheesy romance, but profound love with lots of psychological control, humiliation and stripes. lol Kindly include quess work for the reader and a nice twist at the end.

*Starts humming "What I Did For Love" as I saunter from the room.

[H Dean]

I, for one, would find it refreshing to have a BDSM story written that was based on love. Not like a cheesy romance, but profound love with lots of psychological control, humiliation and stripes. lol Kindly include quess work for the reader and a nice twist at the end.

*Starts humming "What I Did For Love" as I saunter from the room.

Hey, I did a story based on love called "The Last Night". Almost no one read it but everyone who did seemed to love it.

Seems like nobody wants to read a romance. Damned dirty apes!

[Isabella King]

I reckon, for a story to be good, you have to get your reader to care about your main character. Doesn't matter if you take the love route, the violent route or combine the two, as long as your reader cares about the character...and that you've included plenty of whips, chains and forced sex, of course.